100 Days of Star Wars in Ink Summer Challenge: Day 2 & 3

This one was pretty large, full 8.5 x 11 sketchbook page.
The pupil in the characters left eye is too big.
Otherwise, I'm pretty please with his face.

You can see that I tried varying approaches to representing the cloth folds with varying success.

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Reference Image

Gesture Sketch

Some basic anatomy points. They feel off.

1st Layer on character's face.

Initial layer on clothing.
More to come...

Final